Thursday, January 21, 2010

My dreams - School

My topic is about the drams I have had, I have had some crazy dreams and some are scare but they are all good, and even in a lot of them i don't know who the peolpe are.

School

First day of school uhh.. not again, its fall but there’s none here yet just this girl I see running up and down the halls, it didn’t bother me until she’s running at me I got scared and tried to run outside but I wasn’t fast she was there when I was half way I see one door principle. I didn’t care I ran in and locked it oh my god it was Hanna this goody girl just sitting there……………………………………. Then it went black I don’t know what happened but now I walking up the school and its winter and cold, once I got in it was class after class after class I don’t know what happened to lunch or I didn’t go I ever did like school lunch. Last class of the day I see Aron he hugs me and then leaves, now Adam runs up picks me up and spins around I struggle trying to get out but it didn’t help. When he finely let go I ran to class I thought about what happened teacher didn’t do anything what’s with that.

Wednesday, January 13, 2010

First semester portfolio - favorite piece

The genre is Poem video, it’s about being out in a country and not caring about what had just happened it be free to do whatever you want. This poem is my favorite because I love to just go out to the country and drive until well I think I am lost or start to go to E, but I go out there then I fight with my mom or even with my sister. The idea come from when I was out driving with my sister in the country.

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

First semester portfolio – piece I’d like to revise

The piece id like to revise is my haiku, it’s ok I just think I could do better. maybe make it longing or lik,e in a story.

Leaves fall
All I see are leaves
They fall down to the unknown
And give the Earth color

First semester reflection

I think I have grown as a language arts student, just by have Mrs.Moege there making things fun for us, and not saying no.

Some of the things I learned in first semester, I learned a lot in the semester like Magic 3, better reading strategies, Hyphenated modifier helping verbs linking verbs There’s a lot more I like them, they were easy, But not a first.

I think I could do better this semester, I think I will get more of my homework done and not try to get in trouble.